What is Haiku?

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By Inspirepub

Photo: slack12
Photo: slack12

There seems to be broadly-based agreement that a haiku poem written in English consists of three lines, seventeen syllables, arranged in the order 5-7-5.

Then there is not-so broad agreement that a haiku generally relates to natural things, and generally contains a reference to a season.

A humorous poem referring to human foibles, and using irony or satire, would, according to some, more correctly be called a senryu, rather than a haiku.

This fact has been lost on generations of elementary school teachers, whose young charges gladly fall on haiku as being a great poetic form because it has the supreme virtue of being short.

So, this stylish "haiku" ...

.

Haiku is easy

Although some don't make much sense,

Refrigerator.

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... would more correctly be referred to as a senryu.

The difficulties in translating a poetic form from one language to another are many-fold, and the subtle differences between Japanese on - sound units - and English syllables have been vigorously debated at the nose-bleed level of ivory tower academia for decades.

Traditional haiku have a break, either at the end of the first line, or at the end of the second. Sometimes, this break is indicated with a punctuation sound (a kireji) which has no direct equivalent in the English language.

Despite the difficulties, or perhaps because they are blissfully ignorant of them, English-speakers have embraced the haiku form whole-heartedly.

The first authoritative work on haiku was published in English in 1949 by R.H. Blyth, an Englishman living in Japan. He has been criticised since for his narrow view of suitable topics for haiku, his dismissive attitude to women poets, and his insistence of a close relationship between haiku and Zen.

Perhaps he felt that way because the linguistic gymnastics required by the rules of haiku produce a lot of lines that sound like Zen koans.

His book did not anticipate that anyone would ever write original haiku in English, yet it became the vehicle my which many of the great writers of English haiku were introduced to the form.

Daily Haiku fromTiny Words

  • Sunday afternoon jammed between a bus and truck we glimpse the silver water tumbling down Agatsuma Gorge - 2 months ago

  • jet lag she unravels his half-finished sweater - 2 months ago

  • Apologies for the delay! We have 2 more poems in issue 11.3, & will be open to submissions soon. - 2 months ago

  • in the apartment that he never tried to leave a map of the world - 4 months ago

  • anniversary on his bedside table a thin film of dust - 4 months ago

  • the road home each bend unwinding an earlier version - 4 months ago

  • at a crossroads summer wind through prairie grass - 4 months ago

  • half the sky a deeper blue mid-life birthday - 4 months ago

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Lissie profile image

Lissie Level 1 Commenter 4 years ago

Poetry is not me but that photo is gorgeous where is it of?

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Inspirepub Hub Author 4 years ago

Rum point, Grand Cayman. I think the colour has been touched up a bit - if you go to Flickr and check out Slack12's photos, there a quite a lot with gorgeous, vivid colours.

But I can believe this ocean is abolutely the real deal!

Jenny

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Lissie Level 1 Commenter 4 years ago

That's why I curious the colour may have been touched up but I bet it's that clear - almost as beautiful as Exmouth, WA!

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Jerrico Usher 4 years ago

good hub.. but what is that "refrigerator" in the middle? a mistake? is it a one word haiku? love your writing style..

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Inspirepub Hub Author 4 years ago

It's the third line of the haiku, and it so doesn't fit, it's hilarious.

Jenny

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Hummingbird5356 Level 2 Commenter 2 years ago

Interesting hub.

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